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I tell you not to think too much about it,
it’s not the color of your lips
or the ivory of your teeth
but the meaning of your smile
and the way you hold your body
like ripe oranges.

I tell you that we all see in pictures
but nobody will see
the stomach butterflies
or last year’s polaroids.
Nobody will see
your tan lines and fault lines and
summer mistakes.
Nobody will see
(but I’ll know.)
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:iconfreakomaniacadisical:
Great Work! :D

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:icongolden-girl16:
btw. i would fave this, but dA has failed me. so just imagine i faved it ^^
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:icongolden-girl16:
i looove the imagery you use! it's so unique, and creates such romance and wistfulness.
like ripe oranges
tan lines and fault lines
last year's polaroids.
this poem reminds me of me..
wonderful job
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~Saphirre Feb 10, 2010  Professional Photographer
hehe thank you :aww:
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~kittylivers Feb 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm, I love this poem. Its kind of funny how we can segment our lives like this. Our adventures during summer may never reach the attention of our school friends.
Of course, sometimes the world is connected in ways we can't foresee and everyone knows everything anyway.
:D

My favorite line by far:
"Nobody will see/
your tan lines and fault lines and/
summer mistakes."
Reminds me of all my summers spent at the beach.
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~Saphirre Feb 2, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much :)

I agree with that, it seems that with my crowd everyone knows everything you did or said even if they weren't there. :P
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*leyghan Feb 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. Really like this. :)
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~Saphirre Feb 1, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you :aww:
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:iconalecbell:
A lovely lyric.


Most deserving of a DLD!
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~Saphirre Feb 1, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much!
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